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[Blue Jay]

This is the first thread layout i've done in a long while, i like compiling information and setting it out in a way that is effective to an audience, thanks to @Immortal Fox for giving me the work - Would love to make some more of these in the future!

 

 

And as usual i'll toss a recent sig i've made in here too Appreciate all feedback! Love u all

 

[22]

Like I already said in the thread which Immortal Fox posted they layout looking fantastic. Looking forward to see more of this kind of layouts from you.

[Asclepius]

Amazing work as always! Keep up the good work!

[Iron Stars]

Amazing work yet again! Keep it up champ.

[Not Magnata]

Impressive work man!

[Anowas]

Very nice work. :)

[Zach McCoy]

It looks so dope and I would love to see you making more of these for other similar guides!

[7ashkal]

pretty dope man

[Dylain]

Looking amazing Blue Jay. Much better than the current one we have anyways.

[Dumbshit]

It feels like you mixed up on the colours at the quest part since everything has this dark/white/orange theme mostly and then the random purple text shows up.

I'd say for next time you should stick to a colour scheme in terms of the text colours as it can give-away on giving perhaps too much attention to something that doesn't require alot of attention, considering purple being quite a colour that takes your attention.

 

Another thing that you should look into (which isn't a big thing) is the two group ironmen wearing the armour, the glow should be more similar to their armour similar to what you did to the Classic/HC armour since the group ironman armour is blue whilst the glow is white.

 

Overall I personally believe this layout is really great and well done as usual Jay, keep on the good work!

 

Fox better like this layout or i'll beat his ass

[Not Enzo]

Looks unreal, the signature looks amazing too!

[MT]

I was blown away by the layout, it was really well done. Great advice from Dumbshit as well. :)

[Jason RSPS]

Wow man, love this work!