Not bad of a video, man. Just work on cutting parts where you’re not talking, because there was a brief amount of silence (just music) towards the middle of the video when you were mining. 5:27 - 6:08 to be exact. Also work on making your text more readable on your thumbnails, because the font and color you used does not blend in with the background. Try experimenting with the text until you find something that works. I also heard “5 AM” by Logic in the video at the duration stated earlier. You got to be careful when using copyrighted music on your content, or your video can get blocked and/removed from YouTube, as well as the copyright holder monetizing your video. Lastly, sound a bit more enthusiastic when you talk about your progress, show your viewers that you enjoy the content you’re putting out on your channel.
If you have any questions regarding my feedback, let me know via PMs or on the Alora Discord. Best of luck on your series!
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